I'd like to start this critique by saying FFFLLLAAAGG GHHHG AAARRRLRLRLRLRL RR LRLRLRRH GGHGH GH BLLAAAGHGHGHHGG GLGLGLGL GL LGLG HHNNNNN NNH N HN NN H.
Herds of WWWWRRRAA A LLLGGH GH GHGHG GHGHEWILDERBEASTELELEEH EEE sweeping majestically acrodfGBBLLAAAGHGHGH GGRLRRLRL LLLL AARRHRHHHH.
Mount KilLLLAA AAARRRR GGLGLL L LELEL LELELLELL GGGGHHAAAAA.
I also like the HHHRRR LLLLGGGJJJ LGLGGLGLGLGHHHL AHHHAAHAHA GGHHAAAa but maybe next you should add a little more BBBLLMANATEESHAHAAHHR R HHRH EELLEGHH GH GHEHGHELLLL.
I think the FFFLLLAA AAAAAGG HHH G GGLGL GGL EAAAALALAL GLGAL AAAL GG adds an nice sense of BBLLLA LAAA AAAGHG HHGGGH GGHHA along with the HHUUURRLRLRLL LRRRHHHHAAA A H HHAH HAH GHHELE HGRACEFULLLLLLE LH H E.
All in FLLLEEEAAARRRRGGGLLRRRR I think this piece is just smashing.