I'd like to start this critique by saying FFFLLLAAAGG GHHHG AAARRRLRLRLRLRL RR LRLRLRRH GGHGH GH BLLAAAGHGHGHHGG GLGLGLGL GL LGLG HHNNNNN NNH N HN NN H.

Herds of WWWWRRRAA A LLLGGH GH GHGHG GHGHEWILDERBEASTELELEEH EEE sweeping majestically acrodfGBBLLAAAGHGHGH GGRLRRLRL LLLL AARRHRHHHH.

Mount KilLLLAA AAARRRR GGLGLL L LELEL LELELLELL GGGGHHAAAAA.

I also like the HHHRRR LLLLGGGJJJ LGLGGLGLGLGHHHL AHHHAAHAHA GGHHAAAa but maybe next you should add a little more BBBLLMANATEESHAHAAHHR R HHRH EELLEGHH GH GHEHGHELLLL.

I think the FFFLLLAA AAAAAGG HHH G GGLGL GGL EAAAALALAL GLGAL AAAL GG adds an nice sense of BBLLLA LAAA AAAGHG HHGGGH GGHHA along with the HHUUURRLRLRLL LRRRHHHHAAA A H HHAH HAH GHHELE HGRACEFULLLLLLE LH H E.


All in FLLLEEEAAARRRRGGGLLRRRR I think this piece is just smashing.